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Post by Volksie on 2008-06-18, 08:29

Few people realise the true talent that is possessed by Red. Here is a sample of his work he was too shy to post himself. Here is the poem he has entitely The Bogan Temptation.

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you are strong
she's desperate for a man
and you can be alone with her
if you grab her and kiss her deeply
she wont resist

shutup shutup

the passion, oh my god the passion

shutup

the electric touch of her full lips on yours

Shutup shutup, bloody damn Saffa...

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If we analyse this work closely we can discover many of the underlying statements about the insanity of love. Truly we have a master poet of the ages. We can only hope that more of this sort of work is produced in the near future.
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Post by Kasey on 2008-06-18, 08:32

you could be a poet, if your poetry wasnt so goddamed shit Very Happy
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Post by RedAkbar on 2008-06-18, 08:33

Maybe you should fill in more of the backstory here Volks. I mean the "Shut Up!" parts aren't mine...

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Post by Volksie on 2008-06-18, 08:33

Bit harsh there, Kasey.

Are you sure it's not your conscience talking to you, Red?
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Post by RedAkbar on 2008-06-18, 08:34

If my conscience is named Cameron Brown, then maybe... Smile

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Post by Volksie on 2008-06-18, 08:35

You named your conscience?
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Post by RedAkbar on 2008-06-18, 08:36

Yes. Yes I did. I'm weird like that. Very Happy

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Post by Kasey on 2008-06-18, 09:10

Smile

Shut up volks

Your making me sound nasty.
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Post by Alexios Komnenos on 2008-06-18, 09:33

this is what happens when I'm gone. Razz
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Post by Seleukos of Olympia on 2008-06-18, 12:53

Hehe! Nice!
I love your avatar too, Red!

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Post by Tombles on 2008-06-18, 13:00

Tbf, I don't think anyone needs to give any backstory for us to understand

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